Re-write progress is slow, very slow. I'd say I'm happy with 98% of the story. There are approximately 2 or 3 key conversations which need more work.
The difficulty is finding the right pitch for the character viewpoints. Stating points too directly can be like hitting the reader over the head with a sledgehammer. On the other hand if the writer is too subtle then the reader misses the point, and it could be argued that no point is made at all.
I'll get there. One word at a time. One sentence at at a time. I've set myself a target to complete the re-write by Sunday evening. If I stay disciplined this is achievable. That would also give me time to re-write the story as a short play. I keep getting this nagging feeling that it should be a play.
M J Wolfson - That's me.