The Thirteenth Camera - The Editors Speak

Well both editors like it. One wants some changes to the beginning and the end, with some further cosmetic changes throughout. One likes it as it is.

This is going to be fun. The plan will be to cast the net further. Get a few more reviews and go with the majority feedback.

Not that I've got anytime for re-writes.

Oh, and my mum read the story and she liked it too. She described it as a quirky fantasy with some good turns of phrase.

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